Marilyn Hume is one of the many women writers who has chosen to disguise their gender by changing their name, or in fact hiding it. By writing as M K Hume, she has received greater success than she believes she would have otherwise.
I have not met Marilyn Hume – was hoping to meet her at an event in Brisbane in November, but there is some doubt that she will attend. She has not been well.
Here is an article in the Courier Mail in 2013. Click here.
M K Hume (from her website)
Marilyn was nominated by the Society of Women Writers Qld for The Alice Literary Award – and attended the ceremony in Tasmania in August, 2016, but sadly was not the winner.
Details about her writing can be found on her website here.
The histories and legends surrounding King Arthur and the Knights of the Round Table are the inspiration for her works.
SWWQ Member Mary Mennis left Brisbane yesterday (October 31st) on the Pacific Aria. with her husband Brian. They will go to PNG; Alotoau where there is a Canoe Festival and the opening of a Museum. Then they will go on to Kitaya, Trobriands, Rabaul, then to Kiriwina Island. They will then travel to Conflict Island before returning to Brisbane on November 10th.
Papua New Guinean Governor General Sir Paulius Matane in 2008
They will be guest speakers – Brian is doing an Introductory talk on PNG, and a talk on Rabaul and another on the Sepik. Mary has prepared a talk on The Motu and Trobriand Canoes and Trading.
There will also be a presentation on her research in PNG since 1962 in Rabaul, Mt Hagen and Madang. As well there will be a talk on the history of Madang through all the flags that have been used in its history. The Russian, German, Australian, PNG Flag, as well as the Independence Flag and then the Provincial flag.
The 2016 Alice Award Winner announced in Launceston in August is Dr Clare Wright. Until this week I had not done any research on the winner, I feel sad that it has taken me so long to find out about her.
Dr Clare Wright
She is described in Wikipedia as an Australian author, historian and broadcaster, and much to my delight, she is featured in many YouTube Videos. Late last night I watched several of them. She writes (and talks) about women in history – forgotten by mostly male historians. History often neglects to mention women existed, let alone took some part in our history. The Forgotten Rebels of Eurekawill be the first of her books that I will get.
On YouTube she is described thus:
Dr. Clare Wright is an award-winning historian, author and public commentator who has worked in politics, academia and the media. Clare’s expertise in Australian history covers the gold rush period, 19th and 20th century women’s history, democracy movements, mining history, bushrangers and the liquor industry. In 2005, The Age newspaper named her as one of Australia’s top 20 public intellectuals. Clare researched, wrote and presented the one-hour ABC television documentary Utopia Girls about how women got the vote in Australia.
I do wish I had researched her earlier.
Just key in her name, Dr Clare Wright, and you will discover so much about this woman. She has spent so much of her life researching particularly the stories of women in our history.
Because she is also a broadcaster, there are quite a number of videos of her talking on YouTube too. I am so impressed and I hope one day I can hear her speak in person. Amazon here I come to download one of her books onto my Kindle.
Critiquing is an important benefit of being in a group of writers. One of the most popular benefits of membership with SWWQ is the Postal Magazines. There are several of these “magazines” under the guidance of our Postal Magazine Editor, Sue Wagner. The idea is that a group of members will participate in a “circle”. Each member writes some material, and it is circulated throughout the group, often by post. Each member is asked to make comment on the other writing. So all members will get feedback. (More details about these in a future post on this blog).
Our plans for SWWQ Critiquing
Another project under consideration is a Buddy System – especially for members who regularly attend monthly meetings. Information will be available shortly.
As well, a project under the heading of “Critical Friends” is under consideration. This is where two members communicate with each other seeking feedback/critiquing on their writing – whether it be for a competition, a book or similar. The Critical Friends process is also in the planning process. The concept of Critical Friends is popular in many education facilities and workplaces.
This site will give you an idea of one model of the Critical Friends process. Click here. This works for a class group – though we are looking at a model where two members can work together. They will critique a piece of writing by the other.
As an example, what if you wrote a piece and submitted it to a competition. It is good news if you win, but what if you don’t? In some competitions, the writer will get some feedback, from the judge. What if you have the opportunity to get feedback from a writer friend? Someone who might make suggestions that will help you? In the end, the writer has the choice of what he or she writes. This feedback might (and usually does) give the writer greater insight about their work.
However, I’ve discovered there is a significant difference between criticizing and critiquing.
I came across the following definition which I found helpful:
The Difference between Critique and Criticism
Criticism finds fault/Critique looks at structure
Criticism looks for what’s lacking/Critique finds what’s working
Criticism condemns what it doesn’t understand/Critique asks for clarification
Criticism is spoken with a cruel wit and sarcastic tongue/Critique’s voice is kind, honest, and objective
Criticism is negative/Critique is positive (even about what isn’t working)
Criticism is vague and general/Critique is concrete and specific
Criticism has no sense of humor/Critique insists on laughter, too
Criticism looks for flaws in the writer as well as the writing/Critique addresses only what is on the page
I have experienced both. Thankfully, the critiques I have received have been helpful whereas criticism has had the opposite effect.
The Bible teaches us about proper communication. For instance, in Colossians 4:6, it states that our speech should be full of grace and seasoned with salt.
As godly writers, we should implement this practice and our faith should be apparent in everything we say and do.
Critiquing is positive and constructive while criticising is negative and counterproductive. We must be thoughtful in our approach in critiquing others. We must be mindful of the spirit behind what we say as well as how we say it.
We all have opinions, but we must be careful and responsible in how we communicate it to others. Are we communicating in a meekness, gentleness and love? Or are we being harsh, critical or judgmental? Is our critique helpful or hurtful?
If you are a beginner or novice at writing, I believe it’s important to know the difference between someone critiquing your work versus someone criticising it.
Each year, SWWQ has held a retreat at Congeau House, Bongaree, Bribie Island. It is on this week and members will be arriving from tomorrow (October 19th), though most will be there on the Saturday and Sunday.
Bribie Island is one of the three major and islands on the northern part of Moreton Bay, just 80 kms from Brisbane, the capital city of the state of Queensland. It is an island that is a “holiday” island, though there is a large permanent population.
Looking towards the Glass House Mountains from Bribie Island
“We have engaged Lauren Daniels to hold the Saturday morning workshop for our writers. Her experience and qualifications are outlined in the information about the Library Services presentation on 26th November. Vicki Bennett will hold the Sunday morning workshop. Both women have a very fresh view on the world and the place of the writer it. These mornings will be valuable on their own, but coupled with the time to “retreat” and mix, it will be a stunning ‘retreat’ for us all.” from Ring of Bright Water, September edition.
Vicki Bennett will be the speaker on Sunday morning – both she and Lauren were speakers at the Sandcliffe Festival earlier this year, and enthusiastically shared great information for those in attendance. Read about Vicki here.
Congeau House has a lot of history. It is an old Queenslander – timber home which belongs to the organisation Toc H. SWWQ has used this lovely old home for several years as their retreat destination. Members do the catering during the day, and have a few days of great writing and adventures.
At night, the group goes to one of the many eating places in the area. There is a lovely swimming beach nearby that members enjoy and a great collection of second hand shops too!